All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 21'

No matter how many times I read this story I am entranced.

If you don't want to wait for the next chapter of Fallen by Nephylim she has posted the completed version of her story on another site.

http://www.gayauthors.org/story/nephylim/Fallench

It's a great story and no waiting is awesome.

To continue where you left off you want to skip to Chapter 21 at http://www.gayauthors.org/story/nephylim/Fallench

Thanks for another great chapter.

I look forward to every chapter as it posts, and this one did not disappoint. Astaria told Star he would beg for ascension soon and that as a dragon he has healing properties, and the first thing I though of was Bridge, that somehow Luma will not be able to cure him fast enough and Star will act to save him.

OK stopping there just about gave me a heart attack. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Too short as always. I love this story but hate when it stops but can't wait to find out what is so urgent about the ascension and why Luma is not happy about it...