All Comments on 'Fallen Kingdom Ch. 02'

Great writing. Thanks for sharing.

I don't think she let realises how deep behind enemy lines her family now is after this Slave rebellion. I would even venture to say that she's REACTING too emotionally instead of logically. Her rage and resentment will cause her not to think straight and make crucial mistakes in this life or death situation.

On the other hand, the multiple rebellion factions make things very complicated. Anyone who escapes from one faction will just end up getting arrested captured and enslaved again lol!

But I can't wait to piece together the bigger picture.

Keelah'Salei!