All Comments on 'Faller's Forest'

Fascinating story! I hope this is to be continued, that this isn't the end?

Clearly written by someone who knows racing well and can also tell a good tale

Of domain knowledge

personal longing, and

societal description

there the story ended... I join the other reader in pleading you to continue the real race - to the daughter's heart.

and so different to anything else on here -but just when his daughter re-appears out of the blue you STOP aggghhhhh. WHY??? This is where it should begin to get interesting and you stop - but then I suppose we can all use our imagination and continue the fantasy how we want it to be - after all - that's what these stories are - pure fantasy to take us out of the drudgery of everyday routine and life and enter a world of fantasy and dreams until .......

A really enjoyable story, well worthy of a sequel. The daughter has found him, but what happens now?

Unless there’s a sequel to this, it’s just one more unfinished story in a sea of other unfinished stories.

What a good Idea for a story... but it needs filling out and an ending

That was much to good a start to end so poorly.

Just to short. I feel like I was left hanging. Thanks for the read.

Great start, wanted to turn the page, but there wasn't any!