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by HandsThroughHair

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Nemo18Nemo18over 10 years ago
Great start

Can't wait to read more

buzzie1969buzzie1969over 10 years ago
great start

I like it, looking forward to reading more

erotikpassionserotikpassionsover 10 years ago
Good!

great story. looking foward to the next chapter and hoping it will be as good as this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Chapter 2 please

I like your story. Looking forward to chapter 2!

chesthairslavechesthairslaveover 10 years ago

Welcome to Literotica. I liked the story. Usually I don't mind separate povs, however I believe they hindered your story in this chapter. They slowed and distracted my attention. I look forward to reading more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I enjoyed this story, especially seeing things unfold from each character's point of view. Can't wait for the next chapter!

PeachyWifePeachyWifeover 10 years ago
I'll Be Watching..

For the next chapter. Loved it.

LadyVampire444LadyVampire444about 9 years ago
Great start!!!

Please finish the story. Please, please.

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