All Comments on 'Falling for a Stranger'

Excellant very erotic story

Please tell me that this isn't the end of this story.

Loved it, but the end was kind of abrupt.

Nice story, good slow buildup, but you need to re-work the ending, make it clearer, leave some suspense about the possibility of a sequel.

as the others pointed out you just seem to run out of gas.

You definitely need to continue this story.

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmore please!

Nah, Bob - a perfect ending. Leave them wanting more, imagining more. Possible sequel? You bet. But any more changes it from an erotic story to a wank novel. Well done.

Thanks for the constructive feedback people.

I don't think that I "ran out of steam" at the end but I do agree that I didn't spend as much time formulating the end as I did with the rest of the story. I'm pleased that someone agreed with my intention of leaving the reader hanging a little that was my intention.

I didn't want a "and they lived happily ever after" end as I thought that would be a bit cheesy. I think I left the door open for more and it seems that you want more so I will start working on the next chapter.

I think I've got an idea as to what will happen next so watch this space.

The ending was fine, don't listen to those other dudes.

Slow seductive foreplay. Ending made me imagine the next scenario. Very erotic indeed!