by Rabbitman55
What an excellent and powerful entry into the series. I felt anxiety when Henry was screwing up as if it were someone I know personally. You have a great talent for character development. Keep up the great work.
Catching up I seem to have missed a lot of this story through the spring but I am devouring it now and hope to have caught up with this wonderful romance. I think you really are a very fine writer. And always bring something extra to your tales. To prove my point there is another 5 stars attached . Well done sir.
I HAVE CONTINUOUSLY READ ALL THE EIGHT CHAPTERS.
IN NINETY PER CENT CASE THE CONTINUITY AND DEVELOPMENT IS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC.
PROBABLY ONLY IN THREE OCCASIONS I COULD NOT ACCEPT THE CIRCUMSTANCES :
1. THE SWAPPING OF PARTNERS IN PART 4
2. THE SEXUAL ESCAPADE IN PART 6
3. THE THREE IN ONE SEQUENCE IN PART 8
WELL, IT IS MY PERSONAL OBSERVATION.
NO ILL FEELINGS, HATE TALKS.
IN MORE THAN 40 PAGES OF STORY SO FAR ONLY THREE INSTANCES IS ABSOLUTELY ALMOST A FLAWLESS SCRIPT
A 5***** πππβ€οΈ