All Comments on 'Falling for Her'

but it started off OK, didn't particularly like the jumping back and forth with the perspectives and when you got to the sex you rushed it, sorry.

I was getting confused with all the B names...Brandon, Ben and Brett.

I agree with the other comment. You were moving along and building towards the climatic union of these two friends and then it went to fast forward and done.

Left me wanting a more sensual encounter. As I feel their relationship warranted .

It was okay but the pace could have been a bit slower, a few mistakes here and there but overall a great read. Thanks for writing!

Wow this is awesome let me be honest with u real quick um 12