All Comments on 'Falling for Matthew Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I love this story. Keep going, i cant cant wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Love it. Great story and can not wait to read more of it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

add more soon! i cant wait to find out what happens!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Hopefully Matt wil wonder why he was upset and accusing Matt of liking Jane given the fact he's possibly gay and gonna break up with her. Matt seems deeper than most guys. Maybe he'll put it together. I hope we get put out of our misery and he lets Matt know soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Casey 1988

When I read the part about Mark talking about Marcus saying ("Good; he's a total dick.) I wondered is Mark gay too? I mean how else would he know?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story

Matt sounds like a beautiful guy, both in Jake's dream and in person when they are talking post-Jane. Can't wait for the next chapter when Matt and Jake make their connection. Please give Matt some soft chest hair to make him even more sexy... he seems to be very sexually attractive without knowing what effect he has on Jake. I can imagine Jake seeing Matt totally naked for the first time and looking in awe at the sexy sight! When Jake and Matt make love for the first time, I can see the tender and loving moments between them. It will awaken Matt to a wonderful world of gay love, I'm sure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
AHHH!

Moremoremore please!!!! I'm dying- it's so good!

HeifelHeifelover 11 years ago

Beautiful story! I so feel for Jake. I know the feeling of being in love with your best friend and never really know if it is realistic to assume it might be something. I hope the guys will get a chance to really talk on their little cabin-trip. I do hope that Matts comment about Marcus is to tell us readers something???

Keep up this brilliant story and your really nice writing style :-)

Please take too long to post chap 3...

Thanks for sharing with us;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great job!

I really like this story! It is so sad that neither can admit their love. Obviously, Matt is just jealous about Jane

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Being on the next Chapter!!!

Where is Chapter 3?????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
please dear god

i need another chapter of this, it's too good to lose.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Chapter 3

This is positicely amazing. You are a phenomebal writer and if this story fgies unfinished i will be very displeased. I almost feel like you are writing the story of my life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Love this story can relate so much to it

Please keep writing, I have enjoyed this story so much, it is so real and life like I too love my best friend and would love to get things together with him, My dreams are so much like the one described that I could have wrote it. Thank you and More soon please.

Hayla86Hayla86about 11 years ago
Chap 3

When r u uploading next chappie? Loved this one and am anxious to read more!

Haphaestion2004Haphaestion2004almost 9 years ago

Very well written - Jake's feelings well described.

I'm very sorry for Jake. I hope Matt will be worth it !

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Can't put it down, love it.

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