All Comments on 'Falling for the Girl Next Door'

Could just call this “The Pedophile Next Door” and be more accurate.

The grooming aspect of this story is disturbing. He's 38 and she's 18?? And he's known her since she was 14? All 'waiting until she's 18' means is he would have tried earlier if not for pesky laws.

Anonymous 2. This is a simple romantic story. Pls note each move forward is done by Karen. Also note she certainly involves her parents in everything going on. Even after they start dating they no not jump on bed. And when they do, her parents have every opportunity in the world to stop it.

Normally read critics words carefully and work to improve my writing. Your words offered absolutely no constructive criticism at all. All you do is try to provoke anger.

I would suggest you keep your thoughts private until you can provide input that aids other writers

Wonderful romantic story, řthank you!