All Comments on 'Falling Hard and Falling Wrong Ch. 01'

Misuse of the word 'and', many run on sentences, difficult to read.

ill wait for the next chapter..might get interesting..ray

is this suppose to be a gay story..

Makes me curious what you have planned.

Your first submission has me curious. I won't bug you for details, you are the writer and I respect that, but (always a but) I am going to assume the main character is just pretty, so much so, he is mistaken for a girl.

I will be on the lookout for chapter 2.

Peace and joy,

Shell

but you must continue the story.

I can't wait to see how the story progresses!

Happy Writing!

thank you all for the feedback, i never bothered with leaving anything much even when I enjoyed a story but when you are on the other side, things are so different.

I'm gonna change this bad habit.

it is going to be gay in a few chapters, i promise (or i may write the gay part with another title)

sorry for the misuse of words and other stuff, i'm no writer and i never claimed to be.i try to get better.

After hearing from the author I am more certain than ever that he MUST continue this story. We need to see where it leads.