All Comments on 'Falling Hard and Falling Wrong Ch. 02'

confused... why would Keith agree to pay $500 in rent for a place where he doesn't even have his own room, plus put up with the long list of demands Mike's laid out. Is Mike even gay? He certainly doesn't seem to be attracted to guys. You said his girlfriend was used to the finer things in life, now would a girl like that even look at KFC, much less eat there?

I am curious about Keith and would like to learn more about him. What's up with the pills he's taking? My curiosity is aroused and I hope you have the next chapter out soon & explain more.

I can't wait to see what you have in store for Mike and Keith. Keith is a mystery and how the relationship develops between the two is going to be interesting.

~hugs

Shell

@seeker:i had something in mind but didn't like the ending, probably too cliche so i need to think more

@avid: (eyes popped out) you are my idol, still you asked too many questions!d'oh! i'll answer the first two questions later but to the third, well i don't know. i don't mind eating something in KFC with someone I love even if I had lotsa money, but i'm not normal so you are saying it's lame. hhhmm thinking more, guess you are right. i never thought about it from a logical point of view, thanks for mentioning, so where should they eat?

thanks again, and more feedback please :-D

made any more to this story for over a year, i will assume you dont intend to finish it.? so i will try to find a full and complete one....pitty

Wish you would continue.

why is'nt the third chapter not posted yet?????

want to read more.