by naturallysweet
I'd like to see more interaction between Athan and the girl though.
Most extraordinary story written. I really love the way your devious little mind work 'naturallysweet'. You really put the oomph factor into this piece of masterpiece. LOL, if this is really heaven I don't think I want to go there. Seems no different from earth where we have suicide bombers ready to sacrifice themselves all in the name of doing good and for God. Please do continue to write. I am really fascinated with your engaging story!