All Comments on 'Falling Home Ch. 02'

Really liked it. Good build-up

Your talent as a writer is superb! The emotion of all the characters was captured, the attraction, innocence, vulnerability and trepidation to name a few. The bar scene was excellent.

please write a sequel post holiday, and beyond

I love the slowness of them getting to know each other. So well written I feel like I am there with Adi and Natalie, each baby step... Love it!