All Comments on 'Falling in Love with Cassie Pt. 01'

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YampowerYampowerabout 2 years ago

Can’t wait to read more

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 2 years ago

oh more please, and a bit longer if you would. This could get really hot n sexy. Nice to read something from a fellow aussie too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good relationship dynamic, but it feels a little impersonal, and over-simplified. A little more relational drama, close calls, teasing, personal info, descriptions… would really help things build more. If you post more, I’ll keep reading!

LookOldButFeelYoungLookOldButFeelYoungabout 2 years ago

Where is the incest??? 2**

cageysea9725cageysea9725about 2 years ago

It's hard to make s first impression more than once. Impossible would describe it better.

Nudeman_1234Nudeman_1234about 2 years agoAuthor

@LookOldButFeelYoung, this is just part 01 which is meant to be a short introduction to the story.

Hot_PotatoHot_Potatoabout 2 years ago

This is super good start. The people making bad comments are 100% wrong. Keep up the good work.

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Love reading and writing fantasies about sex in the family. Also love anything to do with exhibitionism and I try to get naked in front of others whenever I can.

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