by CharlieGG
When the seduction in the hotel room started I thought "This is totally implausible, and it's turned into another 'stroke' story". I had enjoyed and preferred the tenor and style of the writing up to that moment, but read on, nevertheless. As I read I wondered if it was all in Charlie's head and then the ending began. The realisation that it indeed was all a fantasy inside his head as he slept on the train was quite pleasant.
I liked the words she used to rouse him, nicely merging the reality with the fantasy.
I'd even be tempted to read it again.