All Comments on 'False Colors'

Fantastic. great length, lovely sex scene. For your first story you did well. I want to read more of what happens to this couple after the first time.

Mom's character/personality simply isn't believable. Her 'thoughts' are simply those of a young, likely virgin boy. Grow up, then write a real story, with real characters.

I hope someday to find a freshman effort in which actual effort was put in to do even a minimal amount of polishing.

I was, of course disappointed with this one. Surely you wrote some essays, reports, or papers for school. Did you just write them and turn them, or did you write them then at least proof read them before turning them in?

This contained to many errors to stomach.

Kind of a sophomoric effort at best. Hilarious and unbelievable all at the same time. But, oh so close. Keep trying.

Was a great story and hit the spot😉 there are always going to hater’s but you can rest assured that their palms were glued to their cock the entire time. Lol 😆.