All Comments on 'Familia Secreta Ch. 01'

Great story, just love the way you write. So it's 5 stars from me.

Great story; you must do more chapters. I can't wait.

Interesting concept but how can they find accepting mates to procreate….

Do write more to this story.

Actually i feel this is one of your best stories. I know you have other works going on, but I would love to read a few more chapters of this. 5/5 and I would score it higher if I could.

Jedd

Love this story. 5 stars.

Well done. Doesn’t really need another chapter but if you do write it I will read it lol.

I hope you will continue this very good story. Thank you.

in your dreams mate ,,

IDK I hope I put it in the correct words but IMO the "in your face" of the story was an giant bummer and made it an chore to read past page one

So I suppose in 20 years Lisa will stop having sex with her husband and will dedicate exclusively to their son(s)

Id love to see a second chapter as well when they retjrn to tamsworth and live together with the babies arriving.

Another spectacular addition to your lust of fine stories.

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Enjoyed that very much - many thanks.

In line with your comments I don't have the feeling that this would make for a long running story but I would like to read a bit more / the next stage of this. Maybe the return "home" etc...

4 stars. very fun read and premise but it just felt a little lazy. not quite enough build-up (?).. i dunno.. something to suddenly pull his true love for his mother and sister out of thin air like that. it felt a bit forced the way you wrote it. this is 70% a great story.

I guess Mormons (some of them) have multiple wives. There is that show with the guy who has 5 wives and 21 children. So, I guess a man can have many lovers/wives and even children together. But in this case this man has a girlfriend who will someday be his wife and the mother of their children. His sister can surely have children but for this story it is not allowed between close relations like father and daughter. Mother and son. Brother and sister. And that follows that the son can't have children with his mother.

But as far as I am concern if I'm truly in love with all of these women and they are in love with me then they as well as me would want to make lots of babies. Damn the old rules. Not only would my wife give me strong handsome sons and beautiful daughters. But my sister would give me strong handsome sons and beautiful daughters. My mother, if she could, would also give me children. Needless to say we would all put our monies together and purchase a huge house for all to live in. The women would naturally help each other with the children. A schedule would have to be developed for sleeping arrangements. Mondays and Tuesdays I would sleep with my wife. Wednesday and Thursdays I would sleep with my sister. And fridays and Saturdays I would sleep with my mother. Sundays would be my day of rest.

So, I guess it can be done but again in my case it would involved two very close family members. My sister and my mother.

I am not sure about this story. Little too unbelievable? And why (so far) do the women appear to be monogamous? I like a lot of your stuff, but this story I had to work at finishing...

Fantastic story. It was an enjoyable and fun read. I am looking forward to more chapters. 5stars

Finally finished this.

I think this was my third attempt at reading it (could be more). I love your writing a story telling ability so I had to keep trying. Obviously I struggled here a bit. I should say it was small things that kept stopping me. Like the blindfold scene, it felt manipulative when I think a conversation should have been had instead. But I'm not the author and I can, actually see the point trying to be made, so it's simply a different way to get to the same conclusion. I really like the characters, and if I hadn't read the inspiration for this story before hand, I might never had made it as the 'family' history is a bit to far fetched. funny saying that as I would love to read more of this family and it's future. 5 stars and Thanks for Sharing!

Please continue this story

why are you not finishing this story? It is a nice tale that deserves a finish.

Well this one was certainly... different. It was a very interesting setup I'll admit. It was difficult to follow at times. So many interwoven relationships. I prefer my incest stories simple and direct :) I applaud you for trying something new but it's just not for me. I guess the thing for me is that when it's one-on-one, it just feels more intimate and special. When you start having others involved, it loses that closeness, that sense of utter and complete devotion to a true love, even if there is real, deep love there between all of those involved. Hard to put into words exactly, but I expect those that feel similarly understand what I mean. That being said, I would have liked to see where this one led. Perhaps in time another part will be released.

Good story. I hope you can give us more chapters.

I believe you owe us some continuation ... you said it first !

Sorry, I gave up on the first page. Love almost all of your other work, but this felt like I dropped in on chapter 12 and (I saw some similar comments) too much at the same time.

Cut this up, make it a few sub stories and then link it back up after 5-8 chapters feels like a better approach to my eye at least.

Still like your style and topics, but this came too fast too much

Looking forward to the next few chapters.