All Comments on 'Family 'Adult' Halloween Party'

I particularly like the 3rd page where Tim grapples with his feelings and how the others helped him. Very well written. Really enjoyed it.

Wow! Has to be one of the hottest stories on this site.

I'm not really sure this is the way Tim's mom should have brought him into the family "fun". If this had happened to me, I'm sure I would have gone nuclear on the family and left, but not before taking out the cell phone and taking a good number of pictures to expose the town. Then tell mom, don't call me or try and contact me. That would really cause her some pain and make her think about her life's decisions.

@stockingnut Wow! Thanks a lot for that. I'm really grateful that you enjoyed it so much.

@scipioparkins Thank you for noticing. It was a point I didn't want to belabor, but also something I didn't want to ignore.

We never learned who "[had] nothing on Steve". Were they saying that Tim is less endowed than Steve, or something else? That was a weird comment to leave dangling, pun intended.

That said, it was still hot. Well done.

Enjoyed to story very much. I can appreciate the environment in terms of the sense of Culture Shock.

Having experienced it at the age of seven, it was rough to say the least. But one works into and out of it.

When I introduced my son at age 4 to Nudism, it was almost difficult. He did not want to take off his clothes. My switch for the situation was that the resort had a water slide. I informed him that unless he got out of his clothes, he would not be able to go down the slide. He got out his clothes so quick, looked at me for the OK, then he hotfooted to the water slide. To him, the issue of clothes became meaningless. The mechanism is the same for adults. Sometimes we call it "doing as the Romans are doing it."

The story, IMO, worked out the best way in terms of integration. And it followed through.

Very hot!

My kind of Halloween party.

@Monagamous_Now Thank you very much!

@Anonymous Good catch, I often throw stuff into stories and sometimes they are left as they are. :)

@76fellow48 Interesting perspective. I'm glad you enjoyed how it all wrapped up.

@FL_Gentleman54 I did write an alternative ending that you probably could have identified with more... but I'd probably have been blown to pieces in the scoring LOL

Another chapter coming?

I've been reading stories on this site for over 10 years and this is the second story in as many weeks that have been the absolute best. PLEASE continue this!

Need another chapter . Maybe tim and Holly get married. And take over the family holloween party. Great story hope you win

Bikinis, in Idaho, near Halloween? I don't think so. Lol

I think the mother an son should more time together .In the story instead when taking his mother to bed

Tags of the gang bang would have stopped me from wasting my time.

Great story!! Loved the emotional hesitation and the family helping tim to enjoy the realization of what was happening. As well as what would be continuing to happen whether he joined the fun or not. Absolutely well written. 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐!!!

@vanye it was a warm day....!!!!

LOL

@Carp2021 Thanks a lot! I appreciate the support!

@Anonymous Wow, that's really nice of you to say. Thanks a ton!

@Anonymous Yeah. I considered that it might feel a bit of an abrupt ending. I hope it was still enjoyable for you!

@Jonboy12345678910 No plans at this time. I'm working on my series again. "Tangled Web"

@redlion75 Thanks for reading!

@NudeInMaine Glad you enjoyed it!

Overall was a really good.story, but I thought a lousy ending. The attraction to his mother was well documented, but you just glossed over any interaction between him and her. After all the detail between him/aunt and him/cousin, I honestly felt short-changed that he and mom didnt have a hot scene. And from the talk with stepdad explaining their transition into that lifestyle I dont think it was a stretch for him/mom to have hooked up and enjoyed it with no real hang up.

Please, in the future try and use Coeur d'Alene more often.

Thanks.

the mother should help her son get over his shyness when have sex with he mother

Would like the story line to continue.

A lovely story in fact. Somewhat touching and romantic at the end.

Another chapter where Steve dies and Tim comes home to Mom and becomes her live in lover and partner would be good

5/5

Great story. Not a fan of the aunt forcing something on the main character he was clearly not ready for. Overall the story was still hot and well written. Thanks for this tale.

Loved thus story but mom should of had more sex with her son please continue and have Tim move back in with his mother 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Not the usual Halloween story I'm used to. Rather disappointing. Just a fuckfest and the mom+son barely did anything together. Even the other sex was kind of lame. And the MC was a weak-ass beta acting more timidly than a virgin nerd around a girl most of the time.

Just by the way. Tim and Holly broke no laws in Idaho. They can't marry but sex, reproduction, and cohabitation are legal there, BTW there's nothing in the Bible forbidding cousins to lie together.

While I enjoyed the story, I found the ending to be rather can’t-Climactic. The sex between Tim and Melanie was rather pedestrian and bland. With all the preliminary build up, it simply failed at the end. It trivialized the anxiety of the antagonist. And the gang bang read like several men taking turns at a putting green. However, the character development was on point, we knew these characters, even though we were just reading porn. 4/5

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The whole boat scenario was more than a little contrived. For a college grad, Tim seemed to be alcohol adverse. "One beer and a Mai Tai loaded with rum had been enough to knock him out....while you were passed out". Many parts were excessively verbose "remodeling project for her Insurance Agency Office in downtown Coeur d'Alene, Idaho". Tim/Mother sex scene was way too abbreviated. Seemed as if he was simply one of many in a cluster fuck. 4/5