All Comments on 'Family Affair'

I really liked your story line,and the sex was hot,the only thing I see that could help your next story would be to run it through a spell checker.I hope that you will write another chapter to this story,with more sex between sis in law and bro in law.you could get the four of them into a four way,where brother and sister get it on .Thanks for the post......Rich

not sure about incest here, and could use some editing, but enjoyable. clever storyline