All Comments on 'Family Battle Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
HELL YEAH!!!!!!!

DAMN THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!

WRITE MORE!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
You do need a 3rd ch. at the very least

kidrock:

A very hot story but it needs at least another chapter or two. Thank You. Ronnie W.

hulkster21hulkster21about 11 years ago

This is getting hotter and hotter. The milk on the floor was a nice touch. I can't wait to read more

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