All Comments on 'Family Business'

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LuckyMeOriginalStoriesLuckyMeOriginalStoriesalmost 3 years agoAuthor

I pray everyone who reads this will give it a good rating, I worked long and hard on this one. It may or not may not become a series.

FeredirFerediralmost 3 years ago

I liked it! Always up for some futa incest content considering it's kind of rare. Kinda bummed about the no futa on male rule as I think it would fit considering this is a village full of horny futas with only 2 males in it but I enjoyed it nonetheless. It actually reminded me of a manga I read, although it didn't have futa content. Here's hoping we get a second part and, hopefully, a series. Cheers!

svencarnsvencarnalmost 3 years ago

Oh, man it is good! Definitely not fapping material though.

redlehredlehalmost 3 years ago

well if you consider in continuing the series you deserve 5 stars, but if not than you deserve less, i will give some time to this "series" and see if the author updates this series

SlofredSlofredalmost 3 years ago

I was fully invested in this story. That said. If you do not move on the ending SUCKS. I rarely have negative comments for free, work but You did not do the main character properly with this story if you are truly going to end it here. 5 stars up to this point none for this chapter.

NonSequitourNonSequitourover 1 year ago

Was this strange?

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Was this surreal?

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Do hermaphrodites fit (no pun intended) in Transgenders & Crossdressers or in Non-Human?

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Was I doing drugs while reading this? (No)

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Was the author doing drugs while writing this? (I don't know)

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SO many questions...

redlion75redlion7510 months ago

I threw up a little. I was interested until mom whips out a dick then covered my phone in green chunks

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I love writing. But the thing I love writing most of all I think, are smutty stories that have a story plot also. UPDATE for 7/21/ 2021 I am currently working on my Dark Roots chapters and working on a second installment for Family Business. be on the lookout for more charact...

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