All Comments on 'Family Camping Trip Ch. 05'

Loved this series!! Hopefully it will continue once they get home! Five stars and a favorite point!

Great story from one of the best! Thanks StoryMan! 5 BIG ASS FAT FUCKING FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Another incest story with the father involved but not indicated in the tags. I didn't like that.

Very good series. I enjoyed it emensly.

I loved the story but if you are claiming that the son is 20yrs old at least make him sound like it, rather than 15.

Didn't like Jenny and the dad

Jenny should stick with Trevor

Damn, no rest for the wicked....

One of the family of his generation deserves to be special with him, looking forward to seeing how that works out! Jenny with Trevor would be best, shame about Chris not ... loving it. If he and Dee become sweet on each other, that would also be great, while a tiny bit unexpected. Dee certainly has the verve to keep up with him, or to prod him to greatness!

Aunty, the life-long crush, seems a darling, and they are good for each other!

Trevor should be a lot more confident at this point, with all of this pussy, and all of it wanting a run at him. "Yes" or ""I am kind of committed (or tired) at this point, but, thank you!" should be his only types of responses at this point, no more hemming and hawing!

The story has serious continuity problems, maybe because of the years that went by between different chapters being written. You should have read the older chapters before writing a new one.