All Comments on 'Family Disrupted Pt. 01'

Holy shit, I thought you were dead. Glad to see you back.

Not a fan of cuck stories, but you were honest with you tags, so props there

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The thing I dont get is your tag line

Why would cuckholds beware that other men are going to fuck their wives? They are cucks, other men fucking their wives is what they want

1/5 Cuck drivel

Do I take it that this is meant as some kind of parody? Written by someone with a warped sense of humour.

Hopefully so as it is a train wreck of a story otherwise.

Best story on lit!

Welcome back!!

This is nuts.

TRASH.. . fantasy or not guns are real authors real write some of the most stupid shit

I stopped reading here: "Our players are star athletes, young, but full of potential. They're the future leaders of the world, real assets to our school.", understanding what kind of person wrote this, so not understanding why this kind of trash was accepted in LW...1* (where are the very, very negative ratings when we need them?)

Purple Monkey. Name checks out.

I hope your tongue is well embedded in your cheek and you are NOT a "woke" imbecile. Love the sarcasm but, unfortunately, for a lot of "progressive" neophytes it is not recognized.

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What was this??

well its nice to see you writing again

Ignore the comments,,, this is fucking awesome! Chapter 2 please!!!

WHAT CRAP !!!!

Makes about as much sense as your username .......

OP is smoking some good shit. My guess is bath salts cut with powdered C4 and peyote-infused MSG. I love the non-sensical, obtuse and highly irreverent commentary, but even insane ravings must come together on some level to interest and engage the reader enough to stay with it. Hunter S. Thompson comes to mind, but to paraphrase Jules Winfield, "Hunter S. Thompson had a personality!" OP needs to up his game, but I see real dystopian promise here! I score this 4/5, because I'm an eternal optimist.

Looking at your writing history in fetish and ir, either one would be a more fitting place for this POS.

Love the idea and if you can get passed some of the unbelievable able stuff like the community service shit and the boys being possibly expelled from all state schools, and them living outside of their house, the story is really hot 🥵. I will read chapter two. Just make some things a little more real.

Not sure whats a bigger Pile of shit...you or this...insipid drivel.

If you thought this crap was good, you need to take advantage of the fact that your Obamacare covers the costs of mental health issues, and they may have a service that comes to you r home and opens that closet door that youre afraid to open on your own.

Good God LW is turning into a serious outhouse for the dregs of society now.

Insanely hot!

hello, how are you? have you seen natasha henstridge the unhealer dressed as a waitress by god she is a milf goddess please please I ask you have a story about her or with the same characteristics of her that woman in that movie dressed as a waitress makes anyone hard but I want to tell a story about a milf mom and her weak son who is harassed by the blacks at his school please please I ask you thank you very much if you can see the movie or the photos of her in the movie thank you very much

More fag cuck shit. Thanks for the effort.

I'm not a big fan of the genre, but this was superb. I really like the dialogue.

Total drivel.What sort of father allows his kids to be dissed like this. Total racial BULLSHIT.

Wrong catagory clearly. LW section is collapsing with this type of garbage

JJ

Don't listen to the haters in these comments, It's so good to have you back writing, please write more. I'm happily waiting for a part 2.

You will post the next chapter and get hammered for the crap that it is. There is no stopping you! Thankfully I know not to read it!

Fantastic story, but more than anything else I'm really glad to see you back here!

All this guys that say your story is great just wish you are a real women and they hope they can have a chance to be with you. Hahaha fucking loosers

Why so many stories revolve around racist fantasies. We have a weak white male again and a huge black man with a huge phallus. Disgusting story humiliating whites.Legio Patria Nostra !!!

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Why so many stories revolve around racist fantasies. We have a weak white male again and a huge black man with a huge phallus. Disgusting story humiliating whites.

LEGIO PATRIA NOSTRA !!!

RASIST S..... 0*

It's difficult to comprehend the myriad issues here, but the most glaring of all is your lack of writing talent. I've read more coherent writings from a six year old.

Wow you must really hate white people, you are really ignorant, couldn’t finish, didn’t turn me on a bit but had to leave a comment, you really do suck

Lol! It was so ridiculous that I couldn't even finish it. Got a good laugh though.

PurpleMokeyDishwash is back?!? I'm so glad to see your new post. It's ridiculous big cock humiliation per usual, and I fucking love it.

Can't wait to see the rest.

couldn't even read past the first paragraph of page three

your nothing but racist

sounds like someone should shove a this crap down your throat and let you chock on this shit.

Another small-dicked author writes a bunch of shit about the nonexistent BBC and how white women lose their minds, their self-respect and their entire lives for a shot at it. Just awful, like every other example of this mythology.

Why are woke people who call themselves 'liberals' so racist and anti-white?

Interesting plot. Managed to be anti white, anti black, anti men, and anti women, all at the same time. I am in total agreement, all humans are contemptible. Extinction can't come soon enough

Her son has his limbs broken, is in the hospital, but she is so cock crazy for this ex-convict that she is willing to overlook the fact that he put her first born there to begin with. Wow... there are a ton of plausible and alternative scenarios that would be a better fit for this nonsense. Oh I forgot to mention the story he tells where he invades a home for rotisserie chicken LOL??? WTF ??? AND THEN fucks a mother AND THEN kills the husband AND THEN RESUMES fucking the mother AND THEN kills the son, AND THEN proceeds to keep fucking the mother who's home.... AND THEN the daughter comes home stepping over her dead brother and father to be so turned on that she licks the balls of the man who killed them and proceeds to involve herself in incest with her mother. WOW BRO THIS STORY MIGHT BE A BIT OVER THE TOP WITH BULLSHIT... MAYBE?

Worst thing I ever read