All Comments on 'Family Essence - Deviant - Pt. 01'

Why not add the mom into thr harem? If she's single and hot( i assume) then why not?

A bit odd but still good content.

Cool story, where else are you posting it/release schedule?

Great start to the story.

Full marks, please keep writing!

Love it, need another please.

This is really, really good. You have an excellent grasp of the tender side of things, and the fantasy shows you have a great grasp of story. Please upload the next one as soon as possible!

Very nice story...and for those of us that are nerds out here, the sci-fi edge to it is very appealing...

The story builds so easily, with a little back story and family history...for me, this also makes me appreciate where the story is going...

Please write the next story/chapter, as soon as possible...this is too good to have to wait for!!

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《"I was thinking we could get pizza and watch Firefly," I reply, following her into the living room. "Haven't seen it since summer."》

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You had me at the first mention of FIREFLY!!! Shiny!

I am most certainly a Browncoat!

But seriously folks, there's absolutely nothing about this story that I didn't approve of. I did spot a couple of minor mistakes, one of which was a continuity error. 🤔 But I really enjoyed this one. It has been a very long time since I have read a Brother/Sister incest story and not been highly critical of it. You hit a homerun right out of the park! 5/5