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Attempted serial writist, with a penchant for sci-fi and fantasy. Note on punctuation: I use UK style. https://www.grammarbook.com/blog/commas/exchanging-english-over-the-pond-u-s-and-u-k-part-iv/#:~:text=Quotation%20marks Apologies if you are accustomed to speech in "double...