All Comments on 'Family Fornication Contest'

Continue please

Nice 😊

how about another with the parents ??

A long read is over stating the obvious but such a well plotted, constructed, and executed tale deserves a reads devotion to more than a wank. Hopefully the tale of E & E enterprises doesn't end here. Mom should have her arse stuffed by son who was denied access to his valentine's rumpus. Maybe a 4 some of musical orgasms.

Sweet story. Hot action, thanks for this.

very hot story would love to read another chapter with the parents

Amazing. I loved the story, especially the ending. Keep on writing.

Great story! I hope there is a follow up chapter with their parents. Then a third chapter were you add their aunts, uncles and cousins to the mix...

Please keep up the good work. Literotica really needs some good authors.......

Started so hot and kinda faded out when the parents go involved.

Incredible! Gotta love a supportive family!

Been there, done that - with sis! ...and She was the one to initiate our times together in the first place. She had been Trying for years to get my eyes open to her intents/objective. We already had a special bond ...to a large degree Because - although we were full-blood brother/sister we did Not 'meet' for the first until we were 16 and 17 (I was 13 months older). She was adopted out from the family when she was 2 months old ..a long story. We had suddenly had a bond from day one like few have. We were in our early 20's when we crossed the line to the next stage. Was special.

It was very good until the end with the parents. That was disappointing

Pathetic junk written by a chronic masterbater for chronic masterbaters.

I'm not really into incest stories but really enjoyed that one. Thank you.

Good story. You have the perfect ending. But, it would not hurt to add another chapter or two.

Great job. Really want to see this followed with more parts. Would be great to read about the parents/kids, Aunts/Uncles and maybe even some cousins.

I'm traditionally a generous marker which I regret when I give 5 to somethimg less good than this then have no way left to indicate the difference. This isn't quite a complete 5 but it's not very far off, about 4.85 if I could mark out of 1,000, and by far the best story I have read in a very long time.

There had better be sequels for each “holiday”. A solid story in more ways than one.

Love this! Sweet story, very likeable characters, great sex, happy ending. Just a great sex fantasy. SOLID 5

More Please ASAP!!!

Wow, very hot brother and sister loving. Nice twist at the end, I can see where that may lead to more family fun. Five stars, and thank you for it.

Very well done! The tenderness and excitement of a budding sexual and love relationship was terrific.

Amazing story. Definitely needs a sequel for Mother's Day and Father's Day.

Would love to see what they get up to for all the other ff-dot-com competitions

I loved how you were able to show the affevtion and love between Lainey and Casey while making it become very erotic at the same time. I enjoyed this a lot!

a strange twist

Oh my gosh, I need to cum!! Loved it! Hope you will continue as a series. Mom and Dad, Uncles and Aunts all need to get involved. Can't wait to read how the March video develops.

It's standard procedure that the stories on this site strain the limits of likelihood, but this one raises the bar for readers' ability to suspend belief stratospherically high. In his or her effort to surround porn with the trappings of reality, the author has created something that would make the most devilishly contrived sex story ever written read like a Sunday school picnic by comparison. The love and sex between the brother and sister are really very warm and erotic all by themselves. The comical matrix in which they are placed goes over like a lead balloon.

Good story. Hope you make it a series and remember you can't please everyone.

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KUDOS. Superlative story development and writing style with no grammatical errors that I was able to detect. Your attention to detail was beyond outstanding however I must take issue that a take-out order of enchiladas with margaritas would cost $75. Now, I must admit that the segue between the 'mail box and the office confrontation' scenario was a real nail-biter for me and that it had me on the edge of my seat. I also most appreciated that you were able to avoid the usage of overtly crude language as this lent credence to the portrayed emotional bond between brother and sister. PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING!!!

I have to say the "reveal" at the end was stupid and ruined the whole story.

Great potential, keep going

Would like to know how you see this story progressing, if at all.