by LexxRuthless
Wonder lf he emitted the proper “beep beep” as he backed that huge fire truck through the back door to the garage?
Well, I want more, so I certainly found it compelling!!! Nicely done on hitting exactly 750 and still managing to tell a good story.
Welcome back Lexx. Good to see you writing again. In my honest opinion you are one of the best writers here in Literotica. The way you write mother/son anal scenes is simply divine. I only wish we can have more of that. "Way to Go, College Boy", "Central High Blues" and the "Attic" stories are some of my favourites.
If the muse cooperates, please continue the Central High and Attic series. They are too good to be left without continuing the storyline.
Cheers
Not surprised there are no comments shown. This was as much as any pile of bull-s**t as i have ever read.
I love your longer stories but am a fan of anything you write. Five stars and a favorite point!
I like the setup, but I can't help but feel the payoff is a little unrelated to the premise. Obviously that's the limitation of 750 words, but I'm honestly impressed with what you could do with so little.
This is just too funny to not enjoy. Iis really unfortunate that not everyone that comments enjoys your sense of humor.
As 750 stories go, this has to be a contender.
Credit where credit is due. Hitting the mark dead on, AND getting a laugh or three is not easy. I'd say it's on a par with writing a series of Haikus that get the syllable counts correct (easy) while referencing the seasons indirectly through metaphors (not so much). Well done.
Seriously?
Wouldn’t your time be better spent continuing and completing CENTRAL HIGH BLUES?
Was good, but due to the 750, was just too short for my tastes of your works.
I like the premise, but I feel this story could be expanded and continued.
You should have explained the details of the sex more understand that it was only supposed to be 750 words that is where you should have used a shorter version and added the element in the details for the sex do so may have also allowed it to fair better in the contest you entered it in as well with the readers in the rating system it was too short with not sex details and he didn't even warm her up it was just sticking it in her ass and was done that shit isn't happening when it comes to anal you have to be realistic with that otherwise it will most certainly be with mostly negative views if it's not it comes from people who has never had sex before and those are comments you shouldn't take to heart