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by LexxRuthless

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 2 years ago

Well done! Great story!

servant111servant111over 2 years ago

Wonder lf he emitted the proper “beep beep” as he backed that huge fire truck through the back door to the garage?

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 2 years ago

Too bad you can't finish it. Oh well.....

Cheers

SAGE

assman37assman37over 2 years ago

Well, I want more, so I certainly found it compelling!!! Nicely done on hitting exactly 750 and still managing to tell a good story.

namidaboshinamidaboshiover 2 years ago

Welcome back Lexx. Good to see you writing again. In my honest opinion you are one of the best writers here in Literotica. The way you write mother/son anal scenes is simply divine. I only wish we can have more of that. "Way to Go, College Boy", "Central High Blues" and the "Attic" stories are some of my favourites.

If the muse cooperates, please continue the Central High and Attic series. They are too good to be left without continuing the storyline.

Cheers

grayge37grayge37over 2 years ago

Not surprised there are no comments shown. This was as much as any pile of bull-s**t as i have ever read.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 2 years ago

I love your longer stories but am a fan of anything you write. Five stars and a favorite point!

AlternativeAnonAlternativeAnonover 2 years ago

I like the setup, but I can't help but feel the payoff is a little unrelated to the premise. Obviously that's the limitation of 750 words, but I'm honestly impressed with what you could do with so little.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is just too funny to not enjoy. Iis really unfortunate that not everyone that comments enjoys your sense of humor.

As 750 stories go, this has to be a contender.

garybluegaryblueover 2 years ago

Credit where credit is due. Hitting the mark dead on, AND getting a laugh or three is not easy. I'd say it's on a par with writing a series of Haikus that get the syllable counts correct (easy) while referencing the seasons indirectly through metaphors (not so much). Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Total bollocks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Meh

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601over 2 years ago

Seriously?

Wouldn’t your time be better spent continuing and completing CENTRAL HIGH BLUES?

J_Reader_ComicsJ_Reader_Comicsover 2 years ago

Was good, but due to the 750, was just too short for my tastes of your works.

SHDGingerSHDGingeralmost 2 years ago

I like the premise, but I feel this story could be expanded and continued.

MfkndragonMfkndragon10 months ago

You should have explained the details of the sex more understand that it was only supposed to be 750 words that is where you should have used a shorter version and added the element in the details for the sex do so may have also allowed it to fair better in the contest you entered it in as well with the readers in the rating system it was too short with not sex details and he didn't even warm her up it was just sticking it in her ass and was done that shit isn't happening when it comes to anal you have to be realistic with that otherwise it will most certainly be with mostly negative views if it's not it comes from people who has never had sex before and those are comments you shouldn't take to heart

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594196 months ago

I don't get it but I'm glad you made it.....

🙉🙈🙊💨🫘🤬

BigZ64BigZ6418 days ago

This was amazing 🤩 we need more about this fucked up family please!!!!

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May 16, 2022: Hey. Sorry, folks, I have not written anything new in quite a while now. I've obviously got a lot of series in progress, languishing, and I have another dozen stories in various states of completion. I am an amateur, part-time author, and never expected to spe...