by xyshiva
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However your story made me sore. Fuck you are an artist
literarily, intellectually, physically, emotionally, sexually as perfect as I have ever been able to find in an erotic story, simply brilliant, an experience of a special kind and probably one of the best erotic authors I have ever read...,
Ridiculous. Repetitive. Might even be racist if the writer is faking his ethnicity.
The concept is a common one I have read before. It has potential but this was just like a copy and paste session from a thesaurus, an anatomy text and some elementary psychobabble.