All Comments on 'Family Jewels Ch. 01'

You have a talent but your work is wasted on crap like this story. I normally don't comment on characters because they belong to the author. But no man would allow or get excited by what happens in this story.

Sorry but I won't be reading anymore of this type of drivel.

I agree. Wrong category! Wimp. I think even our british wimp authors will be appalled. The writingis pretty good but the subject is less than trash. Surelythis will turnout to be sometype of joke.

On to chapter 2.

TIME TO KILL THE BASTARD AND DITCH THE BITCH.

short and pointless chapter, spend a paragraph or two helping the reader get an idea about the characters, since the readers don't 'know' the players they don't care what happens to them

Dont post humiliation stories in LOVING WIVES category.She is a way beyond LOVING.

i wouldn't listen to most the negative comments. the story wants to be told. that is what makes a good story. i want to see what happens, even if i think i know where the story is going. the right category, unrealistic, and all that other type of criticism doesn't amount too much if the story can lead one on.

Do us all a favor. Write more, and keep writing more. The more these assholes complain, the more you should write. That goes for everyone who enjoys cuckold, wimp, humiliation stories. Write MORE, MORE, MORE until their heads explode. Dumb little fucks getting mad over fictional stories.

Seem to run down any story that has neither quick sex between horny sluts and dudes with gigantic dicks or fast cock sucking action with either sex.

No regard at all for a well written, realistic story like this one.

Oh I like where this is headed

"No regard at all for a well written, realistic story like this one."

Hmm.

We must not have read the same story. The story I read dealt with a faithless whore who also happens to be incestuous, with the added twist that she intends to turn her nutless hubby into a fag. Worse, she's the mother of kids, not exactly good parental material. It didn't sound terribly realistic, no part of it was erotic, and it took about one page for the author to describe a type of people I hope I never meet in my lifetime, since I'm not really into butt fucking incestuous whores.

Here's hoping your comment was meant sarcastically.

Mmmmmm this is getting interesting

Crap plain a d simple. Wimp, worthless, dipshit.

Should have been in gay like all your other stories.

Gay writer?

Why are most of these stories in loving wives when there is never a loving wife.