All Comments on 'Family Locked in a Basement Ch. 02'

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Frankie1952Frankie19529 months ago

More please, so loving this story. Always enjoy siblings in love

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

While not bad , the whole relationship between the mother and Mr. Dunlap just ruined the whole story for me and how it started just makes it worse.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This entire story is just one big, implausible mess. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymous5 days ago

Chapter 3?

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I write for publication and just post here on my free time. I don't seek out editors and everything here is usually written in under an hour. Writing can become a chore when you're doing it for money. This is just a way to put more enjoyment into a hobby

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