All Comments on 'Family Locked in a Basement'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I really hope there's more. I really want to hear how these relationships develop.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Enjoyed it and am looking forward to more! (hopefully)

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I liked it cant wait for the next chapter

SirDigbyChickenCaesarSirDigbyChickenCaesar9 months ago

From the title I was prepared for a hack-job, but was pleasantly surprised by a story that takes the going-to-ground premise more seriously than most. The cabin fever is decently-paced generally, though the climax arrives rather abruptly and the future allusions are an awkward tease. Given the opening with Bible Camp, I would have expected the family's faith to feature more strongly than it does.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Wonderful, wants and desires over long periods brought these kids together, it was obvious from the start it was going to happen, I just had to keep reading to find out 'WHEN AND HOW'.

OI8U2OI8U28 months ago

The music is reversible, but time is not! Turn back...turn back!

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I write for publication and just post here on my free time. I don't seek out editors and everything here is usually written in under an hour. Writing can become a chore when you're doing it for money. This is just a way to put more enjoyment into a hobby

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