All Comments on 'Family Massage Therapist Pt. 01'

has potential

Good premise.

Sex, such as it is, begins, happens, and ends much to fast. It's really rished. Bad.

And what the hell is PUDDY? You meant PUTTY.

Two stars.

This was just rubbish with characters as shallow as cartoon figures.

Totally ubelievable crap that isn't suited for anything called erotica. Could work, though, as a script for second tier porn movie, which really doesn't mean much.

Reminds me of when my job was scoring essay sections of exams for 12 year old children who spoke something besides English for their first language.

Yep. It's that bad.

to h with anonymous I liked it 5 stars. looking forward to more

As it often is - a waste of time. 11 inch cock, she takes it all down her throat - give me a break........ 2**

Great story, a bit short. keep going with it, lots of potential.

As for the anonymous commenter pointing out a spelling mistake, its got to suck when you misspell a word while doing so.

Meh, poor spelling, poor grammar,

Perhaps a story line that hasn't been over-used ?

A few, very obvious, mistakes. Might be better to check spelling tense, grammar and punctuation. No wait, better yet find an editor.

It is a good try for, likely, the uninitiated; especially if your David had only as much experience as your writer.

As others stated, lots of potential here but the setup with the aunt was too straight forward and simplistic. Is she married, what's her history? Did he always have the hots for her (you made it sound like he had never seen her before or, at least, as a sexy woman)? The whole massage started out as a sensuous act rather than a professional masseuse providing instruction. In short, you took shortcuts in your writing and it diminished what the story could have been. 4*

Eh, don't listen to the naysayers. It was a hot story. Keep it up!

I wish these stories would be a little more realistic on cock size. Yet to meet a woman looking to entertain an 8 plus inch cock!

So fucking hot this story is so much that I want more and more of it 10 out of 10

Nephew has huge dick. Aunty has huge tits. What a clichè.

Poor writing by a 12 Yr old. Some morons will like anything.

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Puddy?

Got a good laugh out of that.