All Comments on 'Family Photoshoot'

Even though it's self-admittedly retarded, I enjoyed it, probably because the writer is so good he can spin bad yarn into good cloth.

Can't wait for chapter II

Sequel pleeeeease!

Totally rediculous, but you warned me, and I'm still chuckling.

Well thanks for the “stoopid” warning at the beginning. Liked it even thought it was a little bit of Reluctant/non consensual but still not a bad story.

"Oh, Danny, you're right on time," Mom said, "Now we can do all the mother-son and daddy-daughter photos!"

Yes, pls in next part of the series

Hilarious AND sexy!

We definitely need the next part.

Amazing! Sometimes you just need a crazy story with super hot sex. Also, I’m still laughing at “And with your father no longer with us..." "He's just at work, Mom.” Loved it!

Hot and sexy! Enough humor that helped carry the storyline to make this very entertaining. With the arrival of Dad, a sequel must follow!

Dlad to see no "Anon" comments. Hate them!

You were right, this was stoopid. But I wouldn't mind reading about mother-son and daddy-daughter photo shoot!

Very good build up, the fantasy is very interesting.

Tummy hurting humourous -- check

Insanely erotic -- check

Deliriously hot -- check

Can't wait for the next chapter -- check

And last but not the least...

Heartwarmingly, delightfully and beautifully stoopid -- check ❤️

Oh my dear Sir, you are an absolute master! And this an absolute masterclass!

LMAO

And with your father no longer with us..."

"He's just at work, Mom," Tom said,

Can’t stop laughing.

And with your father no longer with us..."

"He's just at work, Mom," Tom said,

Loved it. Silly or not it was hot!

gave this story an automatic 1 star

Real funny story, I enjoyed that a great deal, thank you

😈😈😈😂😂😂

more of these characters please

Guffaw!

Very funny! Great job, S_D!

If this is stoopid then I don't ever want to be smart. This was both a sexy and funny read. Please more like this!

It's so stoopid

This story is absolutely absurd, breaking away from “plausible” stories that establish a reason for the events. It just is, which is what makes it great, yet leaves unanswered questions.

The mom says, “I never get nice photos of my babies to share with the family. Every year, I see your cousins all dolled up and I'm stuck with nothing to share back." If that’s her motivation, I think we should hear more about those other pictures.

Wonderfully sexy and fun. I would love to read more about the family. I would also love to be the next door neighbor!

Yes please, let's do all the mommy/son and daddy/daugther poses !!

Stoopid? Maybe Stoopid Good! Five star effort. The tongue in cheek narrative was well done and superbly written. Loved the crazy was things progressed and the way the mom’s attitude and approach never waivered. I don’t know about anyone else, but I’d love to read about the mom-son dad-daughter photo shoot!

This was pretty damn good - love to hear more.

Not only stoooooopid, but about as unrealistic as is possible........... 2**

Needs a squeal

Perhaps mom shows them similar family photos

Ignore all the nameless naysayers. We'll done. Dad rolling up at the end really was an interesting twist. So wanting to read the next instalment.

Maybe “stooped”, but EROTIC as Hell.

Now for the next series!

It was a really really insanely fun story. Magnificent.

Great. Perfect. Wonderful.

😂🤩🥰💥🔥😻

Until Daddy arrived and Mom said one last sentence. 😭

Holy hell... I've read infinite stories on this site... And I'd say maybe a handful were truly great. This was one of them. It's quite rare for me to be speechless, but I have to hand it to you... Terrific read.

This was pretty good. Not all stories have to have a sense of realism to them... If that were true, pretty much all of this category (along with fanfics, especially crossovers) wouldn't exist, that was a "Stoopid" comment I read there 🙄 I quite enjoyed this. Quirky, silly, and just a dash of unrealism. Am curious about those other family members photos, lol

loved it

The mother sounds just like a stereotypical Jewish mother laying a guilt trip on her children. I wonder what she does with all the shots. Will I find them on promincestsex.com? Fun story!

Can we get some more erotic coupling stories. Those were my fav from you! Thanks!

Definitely 6ixni9e level "Stoopid" story, but as it is written by you I am gonna go ahead give it 5 stars

Completely ridiculous, but a well-done completely ridiculous. Funny and arousing at the same time -- a combination I like.

Yep prime retail stupid but brilliant at the same time. No build up, little character development and straight up loony tunes fucking. What's not to love? 5 stars

this was an awesome and fun story, please continue it to part 2

@ Radomir1

Am right with you. Anyhow, brilliantly "stupid" tale, makes you instantly wanting more of the same!

Perfect 1 handed reading. You seriously never fail to deliver.

Wow!!!! Crazy, but not STOOPID. Stories are supposed to be entertaining and this one certainly was. Spellcheck did change brake to break.

This was a total turn on! I haven't cum yet but my god I am so hard! I'm completely in love with theri amazing mom! My fantasy is that because they are in a hurry to get clean and ready for the prom, I would lick them both clean and drink his cum and her juices. Oh god, let there be a sequel please please please!

wayyy tooo stoopid

Okay, this was the stupidest and, in that category, the most exotic story. It was too good.

Do more of such stooped stories

I got "persuading shy mom to pose" vibes. Very nice, loved it.

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what the fuck

This is indeed the stoopidest thing you've ever written. 5/5. Had my laughing the whole way through, which reminds me of some of my best experiences.

Great story, but is there a part ?

Dang kind of hoped it was single mom and Sis would be directing bro into knocking Mom up.

Stupid, but so fucking sexy! 5/5

A very unexpected story line twist. Good job.

Stupid? Maybe, Hilarious? Most definitely. Sexy? Most assuredly! Great theme , can't wait for part 2!!

The mother and her pics, just an overdramatic bitch

What an incredible story -- One Of A Kind! Really enjoyed your fantasy of a pervert Mom setting up her son and twin-sister to fuck for her picture-taking! Can't imagine what the Sequel could bring, but I'm going to find out right now!

That was a awesome story thank you

"Can you, truly, not take five minutes away from your all-important lives to let your dear old mother, the woman who birthed and raised you -- sacrificed everything for you -- take a couple of pictures to remember you by and share with her family so they know how proud she is?" this, this killed it, parents guilt tripping there kids. parents are to parent and not expect compensation. parenting is not a job it is an expectation of having kids. the only payout a parent is entitled to is knowing they raised there kids to be the best or better, nothing more. sex was funny though.

Well done!

Well, that was fun

It helps if you imagine Fran Drescher's voice when reading the mother's part.

Oh Fuck! If this is dumb, then I like dumb!

Wow! I'm loving the simple nature of the seduction!

Very fun! I'm going to leave my review for part two as I read them together!

Hoping for a part three!!!

See you there!

this is a great, fun story.

A bit too much.

Best story this year! Wow!

Bill S.

Bill S...WTF??!! Another story, he did not like...now, he LOVES THIS STORY!! Cannot believe the nerve of some readers!!

Spector, you are CORRECT, Sir..."STOOPID" is an apt word for this story...stoopidly funny and "out there!!" What in the world...never mind, I just gotta say that this is a very fun and exciting read..

Dad is home now, & gonna take more photos...Hhhhmmmm....

Five**5**Stars...and on to Chapter 2!!

That was fun!!

Completely crazy, but somehow sexy as hell, I loved this one.

If it's stoopid, but it works, it ain't stoopid. :-D

This wasn't just STOOOPID, it was border line non consensual. The brother did not in any way rape his sister but I did not where he wanted to fuck her it was just him following that BITCH that is unfortunately there mom.

WOW! AWESOME STORY. A terrific story and an exciting read. Really HOT. Thanks for writing. 5 Stars.

You did warn about it being "stoopid", but I didn't realize it would be idiotic. Such a waste of time.

Having read many of the stories you have posted, this story started with great promise but failed miserably.

I like this series it's light hearted and ridiculous while being hot!

Would actually love to see it extended, maybe not with photoshoots, but with son having free use of mom and sister. Sis whenever, mum as long as he doesn't interrupt what she is doing!

That was hilarious! Thanks for posting it, I seriously got a big chuckle. Keep on writing. 5/5 for being decidedly "stoopid."

Ok... that was funny as hell. The only thing that would have been funnier in my opinion was if after that, Tom was woken up by his sister saying he had to hurry and get ready because mom wanted to take pictures before they left for the prom. LoL.

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Stoopid as advertised. Also, hot. 5/5