All Comments on 'Family Reunion'

Enjoyed it but you introduced other people to abruptly. may be you could prolong the sex and not let the girl be such a "slut". She could get hotter and then bring in the others. RICK

Fantastic story!!! I love it when you get right to the point and do not dilly around!! Great Job!!! Thanks for giving me some great thoughts!!!

I liked the plot of your story, but the constant changing of the speaker from first person to third person was confusing. The story line was well thought out and was very hot. With a couple of minor problems of editing taken care of, this could be a very good story indeed.

The descriptions were nice. The switching between 1st and 3rd person did throw the continuity a bit though. With a tiny bit of editing this would be fantastic instead of good.

You do get to the action, don't you? Loved the picture in your bio.

Yes, I loved your story but it was predictable, i totally knew it was gonna be her dad fucking her.

with a brother and father like that she was better off without them it is never good to get the parents involved especially the way you did it

Good!! Too bad they weren't real brother/sister thou☹️But please continue with more 'family quality time' soon....Btw,I LOVE you're pic😍

I so wish I was lucky enough to be You're brother.....5 stars for you and hopefully more invest stories on the way?