by SexyBeast
Hot story. And I thought your spelling was fine. The only thing I saw, I thought at first was intentional. When Mom told Dad he needed to fire up the girl, (as opposed to the grill), while Mandy was riding him, I thought he was doing just that. Firing up the girl. Lol. If people bitch about something like that, they are just looking to complain. I say, screw them. This was hot, and I eagerly await more. Hopefully before you're done, Mandy is in charge of everyone in the house. Five stars because there is no six.
Jedd