Family Ties

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She kissed me passionately again, and once again reached for my dick.

Larry and Arlene knew that Elvira spent a lot of time over at my apartment, but they weren't aware that Elvie was basically living with me until the school year ended. About a week before, Elvie told her parents she was going to stay in Columbus for the summer, and would be moving in with me.

"Ahhh," was all Arlene said to her on the phone, Elvie told me.

That told me the four of us needed to meet for what I was sure was going to be a very awkward meeting. I was hoping that the love the four of us shared for each other would help move this along easier.

Elvie was incredibly upbeat and chatty during the drive from Columbus to Muncie, while I have to admit I hadn't been this tense since I was 15 and asked Mary Lou Kelly out for my first date.

I got my usual big greeting from Larry and Arlene when we got to Muncie. Still, I couldn't quite look the pair directly in the eyes.

Larry got both himself and me a bourbon and the four of us sat in the living room exchanging pleasantries for a few minutes before Elvie jumped into the crux of the meeting with both feet.

"We want to get married and we want your permission," Elvira announced to her parents.

That wasn't exactly how I saw this meeting going. I looked at my in-laws with raised eyebrows.

"Dan, you know we love you to death, but are you sure you're not looking to find Kim Junior? You know that wouldn't be fair to either one of you. Plus she's so much younger than you..." Arlene stated.

"I tried telling her some of that..." I said.

"I love him!" Elvie interrupted. "And I don't want to wait so somebody else can get their hooks in him. You know Kim always said he was a great guy, and I totally agree."

"Okay, how about you, Dan?" Larry chuckled.

"It's so familiar... and so different," I said. "But I do love her, and if you'll have me as your son-in-law again..."

"Not again... still!" Arlene gushed.

We set the wedding for the summer after Elvira's sophomore year at Ohio State. Larry and Arlene agreed to pay for the remainder of Elvie's schooling as long as we agreed that we would wait for her graduation before trying for children.

Elvie and I agreed amongst ourselves that we would wait for her to be at her job for one year before trying for children. She was in the payroll department at one of the larger factories in the Columbus area, and she wanted to get a solid foundation before having to take off on maternity leave.

It turned out Elvie didn't get pregnant for two years after she started working. Kimberly Gayle came into the world at 7 pounds, 1 ounce, featuring her mother's red hair but the same green eyes that her namesake had.

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TheOldStudTheOldStud21 days ago

Great but I think I'm missing the last page...

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Gosh, Hooked, you are known for abrupt endings to your stories but this one doesn’t even HAVE an ending. You must have accidentally hit the “ submit” button. Please re-submit this one with some sort of ending! Could have been a five star ⭐️ story.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Importantly when she is in her 40s he will be in his 60s and she'll be doing the girls night out thing. But I guess that is a story for another time.

The biggest failing of this story is that there is no follow up with the ex. No meeting her in a restaurant etc years later with a young pregnant Elvie on his arm. Or walking in a park pushing his baby on a stroller... Or at PTA meeting because they're children are in the same class/school/uni whatever.

Unfortunately this story at the moment just reads like a hastily finished slice of life.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The ages don't add up. Elvie was 10 when they met and MC was 27 and Kim 24. So Elvie would have been 22 when MC was 39.

Not that it makes much difference but at least she'd have been a fully fledged adult and not just someone the MC preyed on and groomed.

Also Viagra wasn't invented until 1998 so she couldn't have said there are pills for that.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Man ... You cannot stick the landing at all

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