All Comments on 'Family Tradition Ch. 01'

I had to have a look at the other story by BigGuy&randomnumbers to find out what the issue was as I hadn’t read it before. I didn’t read all of it because I thought it was completely bizarre and beyond ridiculous. The version you’ve written so far paints her family in a very different light, heavily matriarchal and dysfunctional as opposed to the other version where it’s all happy families but with this one weird thing.

Overall, your version is fairly amusing, I love the banter between him and his “brother”. I’m curious to see if he’s going to tell her no and make her realise just how fucked up her family is.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Chapter two has been submitted with the ending.

Mom wears the pants in the family and is batshit crazy. Run away.

Anon had to have a look,

I'd say Biguy's version was also heavily matriarchal.

Overall, the pair is one of the best "family tradition' plot stories I've read. He goes pretty easy on them IMO.

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Anyone not quite sure if they'll read the next, it's worth it.

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Thanks for the work to give us some free entertainment. 5* from me.

Somewhat vaguely related to weird Biguy33's story but ok. No question he would have walked a LONG time ago but carry on.

this is a guy that sticks his hand in a meat grinder and wonder why he is feeling pain lol. bigguys story was funny the one is more funny

waiting for the "Big Surprise" or "deal Breaker"

interesting and good writing. I am still waiting for the "Big Surprise" or deal breaker.

Boy i hope chapter 2 is better than chapter 1