All Comments on 'Family Vacation Pt. 04'

Update more frequently, please! :)

I like where this is going but no the wait haha.

I read the series until this chapter, but I'm stopping here. The protagonist is way too passive. The only thing that has happened at his initiative was when he watched the porn video - of the girl he likes, getting fucked by another guy. He's a cuckold and completely unsuitable as the protagonist in a sex story. As a reader, I want to identify with a winner, not a hopeless loser. There can be rivalries and tension along the way to create drama, but that's not what's been done here.

This story is in Matt's POV yet in this chapter you kept confusing Mike with Matt