by Xantu
Extremly well written! This is a pleasure to read! Well done!
Thank you so much for giving me the link to this story. It was simply beautiful. There really is no other way to say it!
Powerful, polished writing. It was both touching and passionate. Probably the best story I've ever read on Literotica
Damn Xan. That was masterful and beautiful and tragic all at once. A wonderful painful tour de force. I almost wish I had not read it because it resonates in the pain of my current life. I am in a state of forced change that I am sure will yield love and beauty but is hard to go through. Her pain and loss is similar even if more poignant and powerful.
I have always appreciated and liked your writing but this one was startlingly "in my face" with its presentation and power. Lynn
Dear Author, Very well written. Quite literary and flowing. Very much enjoyed your effort and the "little journey". Thank you for your work. jntiques