All Comments on 'Fantasies Fulfilled Ch. 01'

Gavin, Gavin, Gavin.... you think you wrote his name enough. Too distracting to read.

great work.

the tension is so strong they are ready to explode

and ring ring.

Poor Gavin. Let's hope that the delightful Paula can provide him with the utmost relief in Ch.2. 'Fantasies' seems to be a fun read with nicely developed characters and a dollop of humor to make it all go down easily.

Very good story. Realistic characters, good tempo. Very nice.