by Chuckie
I thought it was pretty good... I noticed some of the gramatical errors the other people referred to, but I was so caught up in the story that it didn't matter. You did a great job with getting the reader to visualize what was going on. I liked it!
I am happy that hubby was not repealed. What a crock! Good stroke story except for Joann's use of force. Hubby should have repealed the bitch.
i was seeing my ex wife in same situation ... without somebody know that I was watching. Her boss and 4 guys smiling and cheering to them.
gay by proxy eh? This is about as much of a turn on as playing russian roulette with a semiauto. I dont want STDs, blood diseases, or HIV enough to start tasting or getting strangers cum. Sorry fella this is a real turn off.
really great story ... very hot esp having the wife help and chat with her, finally holding her head down etc ... very nice ... i would have reacted the same as her husband and just watched in awe and with an iron bar hardon
i notice it's been a while since you posted so perhaps you're not around these days but hope to see more stories from you ... this is very very good :)
The author is clearly a flaming homosexual so why does he have a wife in the story? What would he possibly do with one, pick up guys together maybe?
Those who termed it illiterate or moronic really have problems...such as wishing they had written it themselves. Cheers!
In fact, my wife too loved sharing with me the sperm she sucked out of other males' dicks. So I enjoyed your story!
ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca
Just another pathetic cuck and selfish slut story. Weak and spineless husband with just a whore for a wife. Maybe he will suck everyone’s cock later since clearly he gets off on it. Stupid and ridiculous
I love a story written by a gay man afraid to embrace who he is.
So how did their divorce go? Though honestly no one else would want either of them but its clear they prefer others as well, so write the divorce part.
Hot wife and voyeur are tags to use when you're too pussy to say cuck out loud.