All Comments on 'Fantasy Forest Ch. 02'

Love it - need more of the archer!

I really enjoyed this story--lots of hot explicit descriptions--but just as I was getting into the encounter with the Archer, it was all over. Argh! Just a couple more paragraphs to take the reader all the way through to the (literal) climax would have done it.

You have a nice sensual writing style, very erotic. Paragraphs could be broken up a bit to make it easier to read, but other than the rather abrupt ending, very nicely done.