All Comments on 'Fantasy Life'

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SeenitallSeenitallalmost 9 years ago
Frame Tale

Good literary technique. Few have the capacity to develop a good frame tale (tale within a tale). Lots of detail from the female point of view.

Bluepen451Bluepen451almost 9 years agoAuthor
Response to Seenitall

If you like the story within a story format, take a look at my Looking Back series. it uses a similar approach, but it is longer--13 chapters.

bigdnc13bigdnc13almost 9 years ago
5 Stars

Fun, sexy story very well written.

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 6 years ago
Nicely Done

Been in that wonderful scenario so many times. Nothing made my wife hotter than telling her a fantasy while we indulged in some form of sex. And if it was occasionally about me, I'd swear it really happened, that would keep her going for weeks.

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Went to school for a long time, got married, got a job, raised a family. The rest is all just details. Please vote and comments and feedback are appreciated.