All Comments on 'Fantasy Man Ch. 10'

I so love his mother for throwing down in formal wear!

great but unnecessary chapter - "Mr Right" needs to be updated! please please please update it

keep up the good work though!

Thanks for the update. Too much time spent on he ex's pov and not enough on mum smacking the silly girl up.

Loving the way Melinda slpped the taste out of Amanda's mouth. I was hoping it was Terri...but that was just as good!

...but greatly appreciated by this reader. Is there an update for "Mr. Right"? LW

So glad Amanda finally got what she had coming!!! Wish there was more time spent on Zack and Teri's future than on the ex, but good story all in all.

but I think it would have been fine if you just ended at Chapter 9. I have to agree w/ the other comment about it dragging on a bit.

I didn't realize you had updated, but I'm glad you did. I hope Zack proposes to Terri sometime soon. Also, I have to give Zack's mom props for throwing down on the heifer Amanda. Update this and Newfound Love soon!

This chapter was nice because of the way it explained a few things, and gave Terri closure as well as justice. It has been a great story overall. I really enjoyed reading it. The characters are quite memorable. Great Job!

Wow this story was amazing. :D Hope to read more stories from you *thumbsup

I want them to have lots of babies. And the mom laid the smack down on that skank way to go MOM!

For mom (Melinda) slapping that bitch Amanda, that alone made a score of 5 a necessity. I totally loved that!!! She so deserved it.

gotta be a finale of what happens from here pleaseeeeeeee!!!

Flawless!

are you going to continue this story? like epilogue or even better two more chapters??? pretty please???

this can't be the end? there has to be a story of their wedding or something! this story is too good :) your characters are perfect and there's just the right amount of drama in the story. well done!

Please don't do this to me.....I really NEED to know what happens next. Maybe a wedding, some children perhaps. PLEASE don't let this be the end, you're an awesome writer& would love to see where it could go with these two. They remind me of me & my hubby.

THIS WAS BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN, LOOKING FOR MORE ON THEM, AND YOU AS THE AUTHOR...

If you see a bitch, smack a bitch.... the best way to describe Amanda... And when the mom does the world a justice and smacks her, all i could say is whoot!

Love all of your stories!

your so good plz i beg u more chapters plzzzzzzzzzzz im adicted cum on plzzzzzzzzzzzz

Please write more....

I thouroughly enjoyed this story.Is there more?

Your story was great and hilarious! I read this one and Mr. Right. I'm hooked. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and I hope to read more of your work.

There should be moreeee plzzz

Please don't let this be the end. I'd love to see an update!!!

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How about an update?

Please update. What happens next? More story!

an epilogue would be nice...

I love this story...please update with a wedding! lol

I agree an update would be wonderful

I will forever remember this story by the momma smack down. When Melinda slapped Amanda I cheered in my head!! So awesome! !

I loved the way you allowed your characters to grow, and not just, wham bam they are in bed. I like that the story had a beginning and a middle, but what about the end? I feel you have more to say. What about the wedding, the business merger, the babies etc...? Or did they have a tragic end, after being so happy?

A conclusion would be great, because this story deserves one.

Melinda really gave Amanda a slap that she will never forget. ♥