All Comments on 'Fantasy Vacation Ch. 11'

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Chile PeelerChile Peelerover 19 years ago
Sorta wooden in the delivery

there's a lot of action in this series but not enough dialogue, inner thoughts of the participants. everybody bangs everybody but there's not much soul

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