All Comments on 'Fantasy Vacation Ch. 23'

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gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
well done

I enjoyed the story it was nice to terri and mike together as a couple and expressing love to each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
RUUUUnnniiiggg dooowwwnnn fast

I haven't liked the way the husband treated his wife - making her do all those big cocks so he could watch - not much in it for her - seems so unfair and unbalanced in his favor.

Well when they get home maybe she can watch him and her mother get it on - its gotten silly hasn't it. Beyond life - beyond reality - they will never be the same - nothing but gangbangs could raise the bar - unless she finds she's pregnant with black twins - wouldn't that be cool author - well how can less be more or less - say "signing off now" author

DeadWouldDeadWouldabout 19 years ago
What's with the guy from Waterworld?

I think it's about time the cheating slut actually DID fuck her husband.

She cheated with Don long before she told him.

About time he got some of her pussy.

Ducky7Ducky7over 14 years ago
This whole series was a good one for both Terry

and Mike. I liked the writing and the build of the characters. The sex was pretty hot also. The only part that I didn't care for was that Terry kept putting off Mike when it came to her ASS. In 23 chapters she has given it to everyone else but her husband. That is a sin if there ever was one. What happened to the rest of the story?

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