by ldrequiv
The ending was good, the situation well described, the characters interesting. Life isn't all about sex, sometimes it is romance or just relationships that can be the most interesting. And sometimes the reader's imagination can fill in the blanks quite effectively. Well done.
even without all the sexual stuff. Nice writing. Keep up the good work.
Much better than a lot of the stroke stories on Literotica.
I laughed, I teared up, I felt joy and happiness, I also felt sadness.
You cant write a better story than one that reaches a persons emotions.
Keep up the good writing, and I'll keep reading.
Thanks:
Tom
It was a very nice ending to a lovely story. You put it together well and made me the reader feel like they had become a family and you could feel the happiness in their lives. Well done, a very nice read.
That young lady learned a lot about life in a small amount of time. Kudos to you on the storyline and the conclusion.
OMG such a real, true, heart warming story. just doing the right thing