by trigudis
Well written different story. Quite a fantasy thanks for sharing. 5 Stars
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Zen and the art of bicycle maintenance
Something different, edgy and bifurcated. Would have loved to hear more of the juggling act teased out, personality differences and similarities between mom and daughter. A few years earlier and you'd have George Mount rather than Greg LeMond, and all manner of word play adventures. Sweet tale.
An interesting tale, well-written 5 stars. Too bad the story didn't garner more comments.
Well written. Not the ending I would have written, but I admit there is something to be said for a story that feels real, vs one where the daughter accepts him fucking her mom or joins in.