All Comments on 'Fast Times in the Summer of '86'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 2 years ago

Very Interesting story!

5

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 2 years ago

Well written different story. Quite a fantasy thanks for sharing. 5 Stars

Cheers

SAGE

yowseryowserover 2 years ago

Zen and the art of bicycle maintenance

Something different, edgy and bifurcated. Would have loved to hear more of the juggling act teased out, personality differences and similarities between mom and daughter. A few years earlier and you'd have George Mount rather than Greg LeMond, and all manner of word play adventures. Sweet tale.

SplitGeode66SplitGeode66over 2 years ago

An interesting tale, well-written 5 stars. Too bad the story didn't garner more comments.

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 2 years ago

Well written. Not the ending I would have written, but I admit there is something to be said for a story that feels real, vs one where the daughter accepts him fucking her mom or joins in.

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Free-lance writer who enjoys reading mostly non-fiction but also Nicholas Sparks romance novels and "serious" lit (John Updike, Irwin Shaw, Philip Roth, Herman Wouk). I enjoy writing these stories because it entertains me as well as the readership. Lit is unique in that wri...