All Comments on 'Fat Chance Ch. 02'

Smart to turn his wife's accomplices and use them to work for him. I have always wanted to see this scenario. Good police work! 5

Five stars just for the imagination to have husband react differently to this painful situation. I could see this guy destroy his wife and then sympathetically embrace her before leaving her for good.

but he seems to have it all coming together. Looking fwd to the finish. Would be great to get an insight into Maise's motiviation for continuing to cheatn when the husband had regained his shape

"Rumour has it that Mrs Cox usually pairs up with Stewart Marshall-Hobbs, the area manager. Apparently he couldn't make that weekend, so I er, got grabbed to fill in for him."

It's not bad enough that she cheats, but actually brings in a substitute when her "regular" isn't available!

This guy sure has patience. He's making the wife gain weight as part of his revenge. That's cold, very cold revenge. Odd little tale, and amusing.

the worst thing about this whole story is that you are feeding it to me one chapter at a time. grinch! 5*

Keep writing and post the next chapter soon. This is totally interesting. # 5

Previous comments . Ditto. Myself, I couldn't wait to shut of such a miserable cow. Its one thing to cheat away from home and spouse, but to be bad company to boot while on home ground. Just a story I know and quite an amusing one, apart from that facet.

Maybe I'm just impatient, but he is being rather cute and maybe timid in his response. What did he accomplish with the flat tires? Who cares if she gets fat again? She has already left him, some time ago actually. He needs to take his smarter, slimmer self and start a new life. Hide and protect what assets he can, but just pull the plug on the bitch and get gone. Life is too short to engage in juvenile antics with this poor excuse for a woman. There's plenty of good women out there. He needs to forget the hag and go get a real partner.

being a counter spy. TK U MLJ LV NV

Will rate it when it is finished!!!

Keep it up! I'm really enjoying it thus far. I look forward to the next installment.

even greater revenge

I love how he's fattening the cow for slaughter LOL

becoming friends with her lover? All the farting around? No real emotions, just a lot of happy-go-lucky BS? I liked the first chapter better than this one. I'm still reserving my score for the end.

He is really working at organizing a first class revenge. He seems to be a good candidate for moving on!

many of them praising the revenge

that hasn't happened yet.

in fact, not much has actually happened, yet.

Thanks for the offering.

Thanks for sharing this story is getting very interesting.

until the noose is closed. TK U MLJ LV NV

Well your daughter certainly didn't get the grammar skills from you. Your problem is you don't understand all the nuances in this story.

brit cuck shit.

Childish....until this last couple of paragraphs! At least one element in this part of the story just doesn't wash.....his wife is a banker having affairs and doesn't handle the household finances???? NOT LIKELY!

But this revenge is cleverly presented and funny as heck. Go for it old boy, fatten the bitch for the pig roast. Be certain to roast the boars to.

This is a good bridge chapter. I can only hope the slut wife also has an STD!!!

Hilarious!

I'm having a great laugh - pretty good for a free story on a free website don't you think.

spend toooo much time looking up words and terms. LOVE slap hapy papy #9

Next chapter. AAAA+++

I despise husbands that refuse to tell the other cheated on wife what is going on, makes them nearly as low as the cheaters themselves.

Mmmmmmm smile, you are setting this up quite well

ok as a guy lost over 100 lb (ya ya the fact i had 100 to lose makes me the slob too ) thats so delightfully evil lol i wish you were still writting