All Comments on 'Fatal Alignment Ch. 01'

Finally someone to make Venlen pay! Simply kidnapping and raping a child into his daughter will not be enough for that butcher to relive the countless horrors he and his brother inflicted on so many others.

Sadly Kill will just become the next in line in an endless loop. Everyone who mates with a seeker becomes a (more) violent and capable despot.

Love the built up

Yes I love it! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

A new Fae to fall in love with a monster that has a magical cock. How original. Oh, wait, you told that story already. Twice.

I remember now this cliff hanger that you left us with whenthe last story ended. This is really good writing, keep it,going. Like the storyline. Of course her father has to find Kill and crush him once and for all, before his,daughter gets harmed.

Beautifully written. Can't wait to see more of this.

I love it!

"second? He always liked it when they fought"

Sounds like this isn't the first time they're getting in an altercation, which implies history between the two of them.

Please stop wasting your time with this crappy story and focus more on your only winner "Poison Ivy".

I've really enjoyed The Seeker series and this sequel. Your writing style is amazing and I get sucked into the story so easily. Keep up the good work!

In this story you use "Jesus" as a curse and in The seeker I think you used "Christ" or something. I found it jaring since the stories are set in a fictional place. I never pictured them on this Earth, and if they were not the type to be uses our religious terms as a curse word.

Other than that, I love your stories! You've got me checking back all the time for a new one, whether it's this world or Hunter and Ivy's. Keep on rocking.

I really enjoy all of your works and am constantly checking for new chapters. I first read the seeker and loved it and can’t wait to read this series. Also intrigued to see how the title “fatal alignment” plays into your story.

I'm a big fan of all your work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I couldn't agree more.

Love all of your stories, please continue all of them!

I love all these people who claim to hate your series, yet still bother to come and comment and whine about how much they hate it. Clearly you don't or you wouldn't be stalking the author commenting on his stuff lol.

Anyways, I have just recently discovered your writing and I am impressed. You have a gift and I'm glad you choose to share it with us